uh...haikus are in the format of 3 lines in measurements based on syllables. the first line having 5 syllables, the second line having 7 syllables, and the third having 5 syllables. yours is 4,6,5. no offense. just letting you know.
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is it religion if it makes you go against your very nature
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is it religion
if it makes you go against
your very nature
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fear the dreams
all know that definition:
no information
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fear the dreams
a good attempt tho.
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is it religion
if it makes you go against
your very nature
all my feathers
going down the street
bad quality vest
As always, I love your work.
i've liked your version better tho
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fear the dreams
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